Saturday, November 14, 2015

Two Wongs Don't Make A Wright Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mr. Hing climbed over a garden wall.
It was easy ‘cause he was very tall.
But he caught his pants on a garden rung
and almost changed his name to Mr. Hung.
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Rajnish Manga 28 October 2016

I am glad to enjoy reading it yet again with my morning tea. I don't know whether it is wright or wrong. Thanks. Happy Diwali & Best wishes.

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Jak Black 19 January 2016

An enjoyable read. The rhythm and rhyming are excellent, the humour fantastic. Well done, Spock.

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Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

Thanks very much. My pleasure.

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Joyce Barnson 21 November 2015

Very clever. Thank you.

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Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

And I thank you too. Live long and prosper.

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M Asim Nehal 18 November 2015

Ha ha ha..humorous poem indeed.........Enjoyable 100 on 10 for this poem.

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Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

Thank you Mohammed. I appreciate your vote and kind remarks.

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Kim Barney 16 November 2015

Very funny. One of favorite jokes goes like this (and you have to tell it, not write it, to really make it work) : If two wrongs, don't make a right, what do two Wrights make? answer: An airplane.

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Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

Thanks for your support Kim. You can be an inspiration with your poems.

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Rajnish Manga 15 November 2015

I have not seen since long such a wonderful poem loaded with so much humour and laughter right from its title to the last line. Thank you very much.

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Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

Thank you too Rajnish for your comment and support.

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Sandra Feldman 14 November 2015

Very clever play on words. Nicely written, nicely rhymed, Like the children's Mother Gosses, Clever lines here you will find, That may even blow your mind

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Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

Thanks very much Sandra. I appreciate your comment and poem.

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