I am in love with two women:
one is dark, the other's white
one is married, the other unmarried -
one is one of my childhood friends,
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Idea behind the poem is good. But diction needs to improve at some places I feel..
As we journey in life and travel many roads there will be signs up ahead. Some are misleading and some are not. The best way to decide is to stop and ponder awhile and ask yourself this question. What information or details can I get before I take this road? Some research is alway beneficial before we forge ahead. Life is making choices, hopefully the right one! Nice.