Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Two Winters Comments

Rating: 4.8

Winter comes, steam from coffee and soup
Soothes the mind, comfort the heart;
Aroma of roasted pistachio and peanuts,
Heating, blankets, duck-feathers,
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Yasmin Khan
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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2014

Loved this beautiful poem that portrays a picture of contrast. 'I live in a city where two winters exist side by side.' - But all city dwellers do not see this. You need a poet's eyes and heart to see and feel the contrast. A well written poem on a well chosen subject.

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Heather Wilkins 30 May 2013

a great sequence of similies. so well written with nice images of winter. nice work

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 May 2013

No winter lasts forever.Great write.

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Hira Akhtar 03 May 2013

wow written wonderfully about winter... :)

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Saadat Tahir 13 January 2013

lovely and apt portrayal of a painful and heart wrenching situation... written and conceived very well

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Hazel Durham 11 January 2013

Brilliant poem about two different viewpoints from people with money and people without money in the winters chill! !

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Dave Walker 10 January 2013

The winter in England never seems to stop. A great poem.

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