Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Two Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two wings flap together
shatter the existance of air
create space for own
to make a fly in air
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ramesh rai
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Hazel Durham 10 August 2013

An uplifting and optimistic poem, we too have to find our own wings in this life and to soar high for a better future! Beautiful write!

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Patricia Grantham 02 August 2013

One wing won't do it takes two to come together in complete unison to rise high in the air. Just like wings we all have to unite together for the common good. Very inspiring.

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Heather Wilkins 31 July 2013

the two wings of life flapping up and down. good write

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Dave Walker 31 July 2013

A great poem, we all could do with a brighter future.

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Tribhawan Kaul 31 July 2013

A very nicely penned poem. each and every action of wings brings tigetherness an aroma to flee above the sky fabling a lucent melody of life...... beautiful lines. Life has two wings too which rides on time.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 July 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem.. Life also does proceed with two wings of time.. Beautiful...........plus 10

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 30 July 2013

good imagery of wings beautiful poem thanks for sharing

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