Wednesday, February 23, 2005

Two Will Twist Comments

Rating: 2.5

I met a girl the other day.
Brunette of hair,
soft olive skin,
straight Roman nose,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Sandra Osborne 24 February 2005

Well, that ain't me baby. Seemed harmless enough, nice point too.

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Michael Shepherd 24 February 2005

I'd say your poem almost lives up to your own assessment of it - good fun. May the Great Prudential In The Sky protect and ensure your precocious talent.

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