Sunday, December 25, 2005

Two Watchers Comments

Rating: 3.5

I saw a leaf fall today
Burnt orange oak
Drifting down alone -
All its fellows
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Charlotte Ballard
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John Kay 26 December 2005

Love the 'blot of mustard, ' and 'underdone potato, ' but I would dropp the reference to hand clapping-it doesn't ring right. That's just my humble ear.

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Charles Chaim Wax 25 December 2005

a deep passionate poem exploring how the world works and how we come to be in the world and are nourished by wonderful words such as these

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Charlotte Ballard

Charlotte Ballard

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