Two Watchers Comments

Every bad thing that can happen to beings has happened to them. This is called the Human Condition, because no single human being experiences these things in isolation. They come like an huge ocean wave and sweep over all things impartially... How have they responded to their Human Condition? They invented music and dance to express their joy in existence, and to praise higher beings if such exist. - - - - - - - - -An analysis of human condition - - - - - A great write.

(cont.) AND they aka humans have also invented gods/goddesses (i think most will now agree) , including the Christian God, and invented WAR, and tools, including weapons, and machines, including vehicles! ! ! ! and laws, dams, fences, countries, recipes, clothing, medicines, etc. etc., some of which have improved and others perhaps which have diminished the human condition. Hic est finis (of my comments! ! !) . bri :)

(cont.) ...They come like an huge ocean wave............i think some will debate whether an huge OR a huge is correct English. i think the consensus aka general agreement on that question has changed 'over the years'. hmm? (cont.) ..

.....[i didn't mean to send the last line without more lines, so..............now i continue (again!) : I WOULDN'T MIND trying (at least) to mate with some shapely angel! ! ! (female one preferred) i wonder if 'she' would remove her wings as well as her raiment. hmm? i've probably NEVER used the word raiment! ! ! it just popped out of my head! (cont.) ...

(cont.) ....some of the pictures of angels i've seen are PRETTY ATTRACTIVE! ! !

(cont.) ...and........Gilgamesh? ? ? more Googling! ! Gilgamesh was a historical king of the Sumerian city-state of Uruk, a major hero in ancient Mesopotamian mythology. so not really a 'true human', but a mythological human? // stanza 4 is the most interesting one for me so far, though it doesn't answer any questions for me. (cont.) ...

(cont.) ....does Human Watcher mean a human who watches or one who watches a human? ? ? and the same question goes (similarly) for Angel Watcher. hmm? ? ? maybe i'll figure it out if i finish reading the poem? ? ? OK! the second stanza seems to answer my question(s) . ;) (cont.)

confluence** of angels? ? ? time to Google confluence define! ! WERE ANGELS CONVERGING? ** con·flu·ence, noun - 1 - the junction of two rivers, especially rivers of approximately equal width. synonyms: convergence, meeting, junction 2 - an act or process of merging. //............ok, poetic license granted to you! (continued) ...

The thoughts of angels and men in this poem invite much reflection. I wonder if intervention from a higher race would significantly improve or destroy our world. I also felt a swell of pride of being a part of the great human race and evolving with the benefits of new technology. Humans are so creative and so smart.