Two Voices Comments

So nicely described our world of contrasts.

a poem of night time feelings? some sad some joyful but remember all only possible because of being in life's greater scheme! ..................well written Barry.

even if it is in a dream, it disturbs one as a real event.a child alone in the secret woods asleep beneath his favourite tree.

horizon hides the dream of day it converted the giant hot sun into a sort of doll -sun, good poem