Sunday, May 6, 2007

Two Very Early Short Poems Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tree limb
from which the bird has just flown
rocks in the early morning light.
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Art Rosch
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Resh Kav 06 July 2017

Not only short... But also sweet

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Francesca Johnson 06 May 2007

I like these even though they are short. Especially the first. The reader can build up a mental picture around it. In mine, the tree limb is laden with frost, the sun is just coming up and the silence is deafening. Nice work, Art. Love, Fran xx

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