Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Two Very Different Days (Both Spent In The Rain) Comments

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Day One:

The rain is drowning me
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Ted Sheridan
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Amanda Lukas 23 July 2008

Delightfully contradicting! I especially enjoyed the last few lines tying the first stanza into the last. Fine work, Ted.

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