Wednesday, May 31, 2006

Two Unicorns And A Rose Comments

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And near the forest stood a rose,
now spotted by two unicorns.
As rose observed the creatures pose
it flashed in anger all its thorns.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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purple moon 29 June 2007

interesting and inventive...........i love unicorns.x

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Herbert Nehrlich1 05 June 2006

How old are the kids? A Bumblebe Turns Gay (risky) Spider Gus (X-rated) May I suggest The Perfumed Donkey, Yolanda, there are quite a few about animals, frogs, wombats but I would have to try to find them. let me know I am honoured.....

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Gina Onyemaechi 05 June 2006

I've just printed this out for my class, Herbert, as they're doing a project on certain animals. Have you got any poems on the following other animals: bees, chameleons, tortoises, owls, and spiders? They're also doing cats. I'm just off to your 'Cat and Cadillac' number. What's your news, Herbs? G.

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