Once Asylum was visited by a sage
And he saw two bonkers in a same cage.
And sage with a fazed face,
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i specially liked the lines, one romeo failed to marry juliet the others marriage failed with juliet. a fact with marriages.
illusions and fallalise.....the true acknowledgement of dualities...well done..
no matter which, we have right to choose, from our heart choice is true, so listen to its suggestion.. nice works..
hitesh, just practice this 'No me, only we': the simple secret of beautiful married life!
I'll pick a life with a wife.It's a better life indeed...whatever it takes.
Love the power with this poem.. Great KRISTA
Uniquely powerful perspective. The presence or absence of relationships do not give happiness but is determine by each individua.
According Your Psycholgical view Your findings are correct, Thanks for sharing Dear Dr.Hitesh well Written Visionary of life, I like It.
your last line clearly states wife is no tragedy and life, any way, is tragedy...enjoyable read...presented neat...10
the true story of life and its spirit 'wife'! , thanks for sharing
Very captivating..the humor..really makes sense..revealing..before and after! There are two not three tragedies in a life A life without a wife and life with a wife - Love these lines! MARVELOUS!
A well presented poem revealing your double-edged wit. I have found it very engaging. The humour embedded in the poem, on the one hand, and the irony resorted to, on the other, affords the reader more than a chuckle. Please read my message also, in this regard.
You have such a creative way of looking at life, its beyond compare. Again thank you for sharing another thought provoking, wise poem with us.