Saturday, October 27, 2007

Two Traitors On Every Face Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ho! There. Be careful
There's some treason in your look
No not one- instead two
Notice of them? No one took
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Anjali Mandokhot
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Kesav Easwaran 04 October 2008

an artistic write...good fluency in lines...liked this one 10

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Francis Duggan 27 January 2008

Such a clever poem this and so true to life, so good on you Anjali

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Al Ramos 10 January 2008

Sometimes we see the invisible and the obvious, two sides to every story. I really enjoy your writing.

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