Friday, January 15, 2016

Two Tears Comments

Rating: 3.5

Sometimes
There isn't water
In all the oceans and the seas
That can drown
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Rizwan Saleem
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Sheikha A. 18 April 2018

You know what, I actually read the title as Two Years! And two years encompassed in two tears is larger than oceans!

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Sheikha A. 18 April 2018

wow! pithy and stark

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Abderrahmane Dakir 21 January 2016

Few lines but deep meaning you share with us. Thank your for this wisdom.

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Rajnish Manga 16 January 2016

With 'two tears' the true lovers of poetry will reckon you as a poet- par excellence. Thank you, Rizwan, for sharing this small yet wonderful poem.

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Rizwan Saleem 16 January 2016

Thank you very much for your kind words Rajnish.

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