Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Two Strangers Passing On The Street Comments

Rating: 4.5

The two were different as could be as anyone could surely see
One was tall and thick and white, the other black and thin and slight

To look at them it would be clear to any stranger standing near
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Richard Lackman
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Greg Davidson 01 February 2017

I love this poem. Saving it as a favourite. The rhyme, the story, the twist at the end and the social statement.. all top drawer.

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Bri Edwards 24 January 2015

cool idea; both the poem AND the poet's note. and a very (to me) unique rhyme scheme! ! thanks for sharing. i'll send this to MyPoemList. :) bri

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