Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Two Souls As One Comments

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I am the ocean
and you are the water
I can never be called the ocean
without your precious water
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Kasia Fedyk
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Robert Green 25 July 2012

very eloquently put, says it all, a great poem

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Okurinmeta Oofrn 19 July 2012

hmm, this reiterate that we are together as one, short but precise. luv this

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Heather Wilson 19 July 2012

Such beautiful words Kasia, just beautiful.

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Neetha Sasidharan 19 July 2012

cool and true poem..........though small it says grt things.......people shouldn't be selfish....without the one next to you, u r nothing.......grt poem...kp writting....

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Jon Terry 18 July 2012

This is wonderfully penned, so much said so simply if i could talk like this the world would be eating out of my hand. Brilliant! ! ! Jon

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