Friday, July 5, 2019

Two Souls Comments

Rating: 5.0

She took the eastbound midnight train.
Bought a ticket to anywhere but here.
Her bruises would be quickly healed,
They didn't stop the way she feeled.
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Shaun Cronick
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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

they both shared: situation, soul. that is why they understand each other very well 5/5 well done our dear poet Shaun

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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

A sad and tragic poem that ends with a sweet and calm result, a rare poetic theme that has been written in an amazing way and an excellent poetic language, which everyone who reads tastes it, and this is always the style of our talented, educated and conscious poet, Shaun, we wish him every success and it deserve 5 stars

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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

the story of this wonderful poem reminds me with the biography of the great poets such as Arthur Rimbaud..well done and thanks for sharing

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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

He took the westbound midnight train. Bought a ticket to anywhere but here.

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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

Two souls looking for the other. Two souls reaching for the other.

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