Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Two Simple Words Comments

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My mind confused
I wished to say
how much in pain I was
but toungetied
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Kaila George
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Kevin Patrick 27 June 2012

Simple and powerful, the rhythm doesn't really exist, but its not suppose to be structured that way, what your expressing is the quiet desperation every person feels under situations of duress and for long, by saying we need help we risk the fear of being considered weak, or inferior to our respected colleagues who will observe us as being beneath them. Its not silly that its hard to say help me, its a universal problem everyone faces especially for those who know help is elusive. Great write

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