Saturday, April 3, 2010

Two Sides Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

On a rainy night
When I was utterly dismayed with life
Walking through the dark drenched street,
I saw an innocent child
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SREEJITH KULAPARAMBIL
COMMENTS
Saroj Dhiman 19 October 2010

Beautiful and very touching!

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Vinod Kumar 09 June 2010

Really Tough touching dear poet and that same night you can see another picture using plenty of all needs of life and unnecessary wastages, thanks for sharing write more all the best,10++

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Queeny Gona 22 May 2010

Heart touching! Though we are blesses we regret most of the time for one or the other things......... Yes really we should have contentment in life......... Great work dude

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Deepthi Vincent 18 May 2010

This one really touched my heart.... Good work Sree...: -)

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Anusha Subramanian 15 May 2010

WOW! ! ! Expressive poem.. Way narrative explaining the 'two faces of life'.. great work.. loved it.. a 10 from me.. :) :)

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Ritty Patnaik 13 May 2010

great write sreejith! your poem is soul touching! great is the person who accepts both, happiness and sadness with equanimity.lovely poem.....ritty

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Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2010

long and narrative...brings out a true touching scene out of mundane life...10

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Anita Trivedi 13 May 2010

A very heart touching. Your poem dropp tear from my eyes. Very beautiful.

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Alex David 12 May 2010

I like how it ends......its a world of opposites, i must say.

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Saugata Majumder 12 May 2010

You can hold the sun in your hands.! Better to say, this is a life with light and shadow, dream and reality or Life and Death.

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Yamuna M Nambiar 12 May 2010

Touching n expressive

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Preetam Shetty 12 May 2010

All I can say you touched my heart, , , , , , ,

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Dhanya M G 12 May 2010

neat narration..strong message

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Amitava Chakrabarty 12 May 2010

a touching poem or shall i say a short story in verse? well done

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Subbaraman N V 12 May 2010

A great truth broughtout in the form of a well written poem. Thanks for sharing! Congrats!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 May 2010

This is a tragic story of a life that suffers, yet it remains contented and happy. The poem is well composed.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 11 May 2010

Good story no doubt. You should write again in prose form to communicate with more reader.Very touchy experience. Thank You......Write more Apoet bangla

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The 4am Poet Worm 11 May 2010

touching and very Real...

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 11 May 2010

Lovely write again! It speaks to me!

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Lalitha iyer 11 May 2010

Very excellent write, touching, deeply moving............

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