Thursday, March 29, 2012

Two Sides Are A Coin Comments

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Spin chap!
Two sides are a coin.

Before the creditor's
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Kebe Iwara
COMMENTS
Savita Tyagi 13 June 2013

Lovely poem! ' but I pray the side that lie when I die be the one sentimented' Love the lines. Your poem reminded me of my own poem 'Like a coin'. Please read if you get a chance.

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Ahmad Holderness 13 June 2013

well written....in as much as the poem may seem simplistic...that fact that a coin could be employed to determine or decide a game gives this poem the deeper meaning that reviewers can only appreciate

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Babatunde Aremu 13 June 2013

Great write. I also pray that my side of the coin will be valuable to the creator on the last day

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 June 2012

'be the one sentimented' One side shows the values and the other side shows the achievements of the Nation..Good

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Captain Cur 13 June 2012

Interesting poem using a coin, chance, and value to make a rich ending. Very well written.

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Ramesh Rai 31 March 2012

both sides have got the same value. a brilliant poem.

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