Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Two Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw two shadows walking
Yet I was there alone -
Two shadows softly drifting
As I walked on my own.
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Valerie Dohren
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Juan Olivarez 05 May 2014

Your words bring chills to me. Such beauty you describe. Our hope is to one day be with those shades that fade from our conscienes and understanding.

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Roseann Shawiak 07 April 2014

Heart touching poem, gentle sadness touching me from the shadows of another dimension. Always able to show love through the reflection of a shadow walking alongside you. Wonderful poem. I too, have written of shadows in different contexts. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Danny Draper 05 April 2014

Sad and beautiful. Perhaps we are all but shadows.

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Mary Forrester 04 April 2014

Beautiful poem Valerie, so touching.

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Amitava Sur 03 April 2014

A lovely imagery being penned. May be earthily he, your love is not there, but in the shadows (in another world) he is very well belonging with you and will always remain with you.... heartfelt

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Patricia Grantham 31 March 2014

A comfort in a shadow is our way of getting through our grief. No matter the the time of day or whatever the reason we find solace in these shadows. Very comforting.

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Smoky Hoss 30 March 2014

A beautiful and tender picture of hope, and love everlasting.

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Lyn Paul 29 March 2014

Your words have been expressed so beautifully Valerie. David is always with you A shadow to not fear and to know he is still near.

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Ruth Walters 24 March 2014

I love this poem...I've written a few poems about shadows myself but never about the spirit world.... I believe they all 'walk beside us' if only we pause to think about them as they live on inside our minds, our memories....lovely poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 March 2014

Intimacy is dense enough to cast a shadow. Beautifully put in the poem. Thank you.

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Kanav Justa 20 March 2014

.... i love your poems... i will say that again..

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Sandra Feldman 20 March 2014

All feelin, that's all.

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Dave Walker 20 March 2014

A soul watching over you, a beautiful poem.

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Maryanne Richards 19 March 2014

Really beautiful and flowing. I love your work. Thank you.

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Felicia Manning 19 March 2014

Heart touching. A 10 from me.

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