Saturday, October 9, 2021

Two, Seven Or Even A Thousand. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Theme: As the dark-haired prince dived into the depths of the ocean to save the drowning young maiden, he was hit by the emotional charge of a déjà vu. He stopped for a second underwater as a series of images flashed across his mind, only to snap out of it immediately and make his way towards the damsel in distress. As he grabbed her long, luscious locks and wrapped his arm around her neck to pull her to the surface, their eyes interlocked. The magnetic force of attraction between them in that instant was intense. A gazillion thoughts condensed into a moment and time stood still. His strong arms pulled her up to the surface and into his boat. She coughed and spluttered and laid there in exhaustion.


Azure skies of the oceanside
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Aneena Elza Binod
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Okim Otu 10 October 2021

It's best to write the commentary of a poem after the poem.

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Okim Otu 10 October 2021

Only true love can wait for a thousand lifetime. Nice work.

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