Monday, July 21, 2008

Two Prayers Joined Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost in the fragrant sultry air of this warm summer night,
Longing to forge my mind and pen in poet form.
My eager words outweigh my inspiration,
A struggle within my thoughts, like the brewing of a storm.
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Cathleen Hodgkinson
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Nice piece, for peace and divine companionship. I give it a 10- because also it joins two not so closely related themes: prayer and platonic love. The art of a poet is to find the divine verses to join even the irrelevant ones in an elegant way. Love from Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

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Chitra - 06 August 2008

smooth piece! fine work

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Ron Flowers 29 July 2008

This is a wonderful poem of peace, love and contentment. Thanks for sharing. Ron

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James B. Earley 21 July 2008

A rather passionate piece......as a poet your source material is infinite....yet from all the many sunbeams......you chose a single ray! Poignant indeed....

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Cathleen Hodgkinson

Cathleen Hodgkinson

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