Monday, September 8, 2014

Two Poems Of Two Line Poems Comments

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The still pools reflection, what clarity, within its deepest depths it holds?
Until a trouble mind bestirs, silts of time. Looking for what else unfolds.
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Mark Heathcote
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Savita Tyagi 12 September 2017

So full of wisdom the beautiful two line poem. So profound and so full of depth. Thanks for sharing Mark.

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Mark Heathcote 17 September 2017

Much appreciated Savita, thank you my friend.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 20 April 2017

Interesting format of poetry. Profound thoughts in very few lines create a sense of depth in brevity. Very good work.

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Mark Heathcote 20 April 2017

Much appreciated Cynthia thank you.

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Seamus O Brian 26 September 2016

This is a marvelous piece of poetry, its brevity deftly belying its depth. Such an enjoyable piece to read and ponder. Very nice!

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Akhtar Jawad 25 March 2015

The still pools reflection, what clarity, within its deepest depths it holds? I can imagine the beauty of thoughts captured in this lovely poem...............10

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