The still pools reflection, what clarity, within its deepest depths it holds?
Until a trouble mind bestirs, silts of time. Looking for what else unfolds.
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Interesting format of poetry. Profound thoughts in very few lines create a sense of depth in brevity. Very good work.
This is a marvelous piece of poetry, its brevity deftly belying its depth. Such an enjoyable piece to read and ponder. Very nice!
The still pools reflection, what clarity, within its deepest depths it holds? I can imagine the beauty of thoughts captured in this lovely poem...............10
So full of wisdom the beautiful two line poem. So profound and so full of depth. Thanks for sharing Mark.
Much appreciated Savita, thank you my friend.