Friday, July 17, 2009

Two People In Me Comments

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Looking in the mirrror
I see two people in me
The one who smiles and laughs
And the one i dont want to be
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Ali Joanne
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Barbara Terry 20 July 2009

The one who knows what love is And was always treated fair The one whos life was stolen When no-one seemed to care This sounds just like my life in this one stanza. This is a very deep and emotional piece Ali, and it says it like it is. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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