Thursday, December 25, 2014

Two Or Three Comments

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M.J. Lemon
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2019

A meaningful haiku so nicely delineated. I appreciate it. Thank you.

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Mj Lemon 26 April 2020

Thank you so much for reading, Kumarmani.

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Loke Kok Yee 28 April 2018

Two makes a pair, one more can only cause friction; sometimes one may be the best way to go.Ho! Ho! Ho! Thanks Mj

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Mj Lemon 29 April 2018

And thank you, Loke. Indeed, the virtues of 1!

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Jaya Das 30 March 2018

great poem... loved it

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Mj Lemon 30 March 2018

Thank you, Jaya. Thank you for reading.

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Muhammad Ali 11 July 2017

in a poem i said O Great God. treat those moments. when he dies. to keep me alive .. very nice poem and not little, i think about the social mentality and that is not pure positive. i like this puzzle Haiku. So, two better than one, if one should fall. i should, before we all.

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

Insightful perspective, Muhammad. Thank you so much.

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Bri Edwards 28 April 2017

i'm still not sure i 'get it'. ;)

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Mj Lemon 29 April 2017

I think Terry 'got it.' It is, to some degree, a numbers game.....

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Terry Craddock 05 February 2017

a nice answer among many is all are not equal, favoured pairings, personal preferences, the chemistry of numbers

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Mj Lemon 06 February 2017

Absolutely, Terry. There are times when there can be just one too many.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 March 2016

We do fall every now and then in life; facing the acts of nature! Nice work.

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Mj Lemon 07 March 2016

And we never plan to fall, though we might/should be prepared...Thank you for stopping by.

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Melvina Germain 17 October 2015

The right one I would think is crucial...Excellent poem.....

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Mj Lemon 19 October 2015

Thank you so much....and three always does seem to be just too many.

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Bri Edwards 26 February 2015

you have three legs? ? ? barnum would love you! :)

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