Saturday, July 16, 2016

Two Olives, Please Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mommy takes a long swig of cocktail,
always a chance for blurt,
a revelation somehow
of something we never wanted.
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Karen Corinne Herceg
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Edmund Strolis 16 July 2016

Are you kidding me? This is an amazing window into a world revealed. I have no idea where to start. I will say this. If you care about the sensitivity of some poets you must delete this gem. I am afraid that they may be discouraged from ever writing again. Between swish and clink. The loosened tongue. 'Did you know, and so it begins'. Wide eyed revelation. I was delivered there and what more can a reader or writer hope for?

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Karen Corinne Herceg

Karen Corinne Herceg

New York City, NY, USA
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