Two old men fighting
Claiming a lemon tree's fruits
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No matter what age we still want to reach the forbidden fruit. I suppose that's what keeps us going..... Cleverly written and astute.
A very clever write imbued with a meaningful message. A vivid and brilliant portrayal of human weakness; greediness. That even in our golden age with physical disabilites, we still have the guts to compete with. another to gain material wealth. So brilliantly penned. On to my Poem List.
Delightfully descriptive my friend! . Aging people forget loss of strength, Yet, young desires stay intact. I coul envision this scene. Thank you.. A 10. I