Two Of Me Comments

made two of me one to call when i hate you and the world behind you and one to call when i love you and the shadow beside you.. I do understand the pain in lines..lest I would be a failure! thanks for sharing Poet 10+++++!

I admit freely I son't fully understand this poem but it has made a strong impression on me, and that kind of impact is more important than an immediate understanding. Why? Because I can't take this poem for granted, can't let go of it as if it I was finished with it. No, the language haunts me, the contrast between the world and the shadow intrigues me, the alternative love and hate disturb me. I copied this poem and will look at it over time. This poem is not finished with me!