Tuesday, September 29, 2015

'Two Nights In One Day' Comments

Rating: 4.5

This Night is seemingly too long,
as i sit espying from my window,
alone with the shadows
And Voices.
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Ovi Odiete
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Paul Amrod 29 February 2016

Hi Ovi I wrote you twice because the system did not show me the first. You see I wanted for sure to reach you, All the best, Paul

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Paul Amrod 29 February 2016

Hi Ovi How are you! Your poem descibes a depth of troubles one wishes not to experience. You captured this feeling and reflected the feelings we hope never to have. A loving hane will be the solution of peace to guide you through the troubled night. A very moving and emotional piece. Apollo gifted me with a very creative February. I wish to invite you to read my newer poems. Best wishes and waiting for some new poems from you soon! Greetings, Paul

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Paul Amrod 29 February 2016

Hi Ovi, How are you? This is a very moving work of desparate feelings which horrendously take the soul away from its flight to the glories of existence. A loving hand can calm your turbulence and awaken your spirit to a solution of peace. Your description of pain and angst is very moving and well_written. Apollo gifted me with a creative month of February. I wish to invite you to read my newer poems. Best wishes, Paul

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Ovi Odiete

Ovi Odiete

Sapele, Nigeria
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