Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Two Nights Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can still hear the night
Pounding in my heart out loud
When you first ran the four letter word through my ears
And kissed me spreading goose bumps all over my flushed body.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Liza Sudina 03 October 2015

He pushed me in the dark hollow of isolation - No, no! - to the light of Communion with God he pushed you, dear!

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2015

And kissed me spreading goose bumps all over my flushed body. The Four letter word. very nice my dear. Also in describing the disappointment you are very good. thank you

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Roseann Shawiak 16 August 2015

Intensely melancholic, leaving a sadness upon the mind where isolation has become the norm, heart having collapsed due to overwork. Sincere and enticing poem. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Sanjukta Nag

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