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Thursday, June 18, 2009

Two Mothers Comments

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One gave me life
The other helped me live it.
One saw me cry
The other would never forget it.
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Tai Chi Italy 10 September 2009

The topic here, is very close to heart Matthew, due to me adopting my first son, from my younger sister! He had two mothers and we both messed him up, unknowingly...Your poem gives me back something that was taken away. A good poem, needs a little edit, but I admire your honesty and courage in exposing these deepest inner feelings on the subject, so close to your heart. Smiling at you Tai

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I Am Charlie 18 June 2009

Sweet...and both would remain in your mind... comparison poem works out in a simple way...I like it.

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