One gave me life
The other helped me live it.
One saw me cry
The other would never forget it.
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Sweet...and both would remain in your mind... comparison poem works out in a simple way...I like it.
The topic here, is very close to heart Matthew, due to me adopting my first son, from my younger sister! He had two mothers and we both messed him up, unknowingly...Your poem gives me back something that was taken away. A good poem, needs a little edit, but I admire your honesty and courage in exposing these deepest inner feelings on the subject, so close to your heart. Smiling at you Tai