Saturday, August 30, 2014

Two Moons Comments

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When I see you moon,
A blessing and a boon,
Reflecting light of the sun,
With your showering gun!
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Khalid Saifullah 19 October 2017

What a beautiful poem! .........................................................

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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2014

Ek chand asma pe hai ek mere samane. one moon in the sky and one moon standing in my front. Oh my beloved moon ! you only grace me upon. Thanks so much for share of inspiring thoughts. Regards.

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Valsa George 31 August 2014

Moon has ever enamoured poets and lovers alike! A fine write on the moon! Enjoyed!

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Salini Nair 31 August 2014

love is the base of everything...love may be the charm of moon.....beautiful............

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 August 2014

Moon that minds the mind - astrology say this - nice poem of romance

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 August 2014

A beauty, a wonderful poem.

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Somanathan Iyer 30 August 2014

Moon and romance always move together! nice depiction of feelings!

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