Saturday, April 18, 2009

*two Men On A Roof Comments

Rating: 3.1

Two men on a roof
work in silence,
shirts off,
coppering on that slant;
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Ray Schreiber 24 October 2009

It's a pleasure to read your poems. The appreciative attention you pay to the everyday activities that most people mentally catalog with a word or short phrase and move on without another thought makes your work a must read for me.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 May 2009

'too close to heaven - and descend to earth.' Metaphor used in this untitled image is marvelous. Lillian, as if closing my eyes I can see clearly. 10++ with pleasure.

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