Friday, May 13, 2016

Two Lovers In The Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two lovers in the rains,
counting old stains!

The pressure of taboos
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 12 October 2018

Enjoyed this romantic poem, well penned write.

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M Asim Nehal 14 May 2016

Nice poem indeed, love knows no bounds and it unleashes in rains.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 May 2016

Surely true love had been attained. Thank you sir-10

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Kelly Kurt 13 May 2016

This is why you are indeed a poet, Akhtar. Love, meaning, innuendo and beauty, all wrapped up neatly in a package that only you could put a bow on.

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