Under the undecorated sky
With thick clouds heavily pouring down.
Both were enjoying every drop
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lovers can leave and sacrifice everything where their love reach the final stage of expected enjoyment sanity!
do deewaanay haath main haath liyay vo promenade pe chal rehay thay chahat ki meethee meethee baataiN kar rahay thay ek dum kaalay badal aasmain main ghaD-ghaDanay lagay hawaa tezi se behnay lagi, peDon par baithay paronday awaazain dainay lagay, uDnay lagay dekhtay hi dekhtay barsaat lag paDi [aur fir kya kiya unoN ne, likhaiN aap yahaN par.....]
Holding in rain. Trying to catch falling drops from moments. Fantastic
DJ wish to go out in rain and enjoy but too old to find a partner now. Wonderful.
Under the undecorated sky With thick clouds heavily pouring down...This love poem is very brilliantly penned with amazing lovable perception...5 stars.
Wow, undecorated sky they were decorating the earth. Excellent poem.
You could add a glass of wine in this beautiful poem! Nevermind! I'll drink it for the two lovers!
Lovely picture and a beautiful poem celebrating the meeting of lovers under the rain. Rainy season is unique in the sense that each one of us- child, young or old- wants to go out and enjoy the downpour and its enchantment. Loved it. Thanks. Great observation- Lightning is intermittently taking their pictures.
LOVELY SNAP ASIM YOU MUST BE A LOVELY LOVER PHOTOGRAPHER so it seems well done ex MAN ur poetry is so beautiful in your snaps alone the world sees you poet Asim GORGEOUS SNAP AND POEM keep love flowing
'Neither any concerns nor hopes Feeling quenched by the love pouring from the sky' - so beautifully said!
And rain was the real player Cajoling them to be together Enjoying every moment Adding meaning robust. ... Beautiful penned poetry... thank-you for sharing this. Rain o rain my. Beautiful rain.
Moments! ! Muse of lovers! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.