Saturday, October 10, 2020

Two Lovers Comments

Rating: 4.9

Under the undecorated sky
With thick clouds heavily pouring down.

Both were enjoying every drop
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 11 October 2020

Moments! ! Muse of lovers! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 October 2020

lovers can leave and sacrifice everything where their love reach the final stage of expected enjoyment sanity!

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Ravi Kopra 10 October 2020

do deewaanay haath main haath liyay vo promenade pe chal rehay thay chahat ki meethee meethee baataiN kar rahay thay ek dum kaalay badal aasmain main ghaD-ghaDanay lagay hawaa tezi se behnay lagi, peDon par baithay paronday awaazain dainay lagay, uDnay lagay dekhtay hi dekhtay barsaat lag paDi [aur fir kya kiya unoN ne, likhaiN aap yahaN par.....]

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Deepak S S 10 October 2020

Holding in rain. Trying to catch falling drops from moments. Fantastic

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Darren Jkoeryo 10 October 2020

DJ wish to go out in rain and enjoy but too old to find a partner now. Wonderful.

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T Rajan Evol 10 October 2020

What a wonderful picture.

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T Rajan Evol 10 October 2020

Awesome poem brilliantly written. Rainful love.

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T Rajan Evol 10 October 2020

Dance in rain under the sky fantastic. DJ liked it

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Zoyza Da Vinka 10 October 2020

Drenchef in love of life and in rain of love.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2020

Under the undecorated sky With thick clouds heavily pouring down...This love poem is very brilliantly penned with amazing lovable perception...5 stars.

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Poetic Sky 10 October 2020

Masterstroke by love poet.

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Ricky Manhatten 10 October 2020

Wow, undecorated sky they were decorating the earth. Excellent poem.

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Kostas Lagos 10 October 2020

You could add a glass of wine in this beautiful poem! Nevermind! I'll drink it for the two lovers!

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Rajnish Manga 10 October 2020

Lovely picture and a beautiful poem celebrating the meeting of lovers under the rain. Rainy season is unique in the sense that each one of us- child, young or old- wants to go out and enjoy the downpour and its enchantment. Loved it. Thanks. Great observation- Lightning is intermittently taking their pictures.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 October 2020

LOVELY SNAP ASIM YOU MUST BE A LOVELY LOVER PHOTOGRAPHER so it seems well done ex MAN ur poetry is so beautiful in your snaps alone the world sees you poet Asim GORGEOUS SNAP AND POEM keep love flowing

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Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2020

'Neither any concerns nor hopes Feeling quenched by the love pouring from the sky' - so beautifully said!

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Varsha M 10 October 2020

And rain was the real player Cajoling them to be together Enjoying every moment Adding meaning robust. ... Beautiful penned poetry... thank-you for sharing this. Rain o rain my. Beautiful rain.

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