Two Love Birds Comments

Two beautiful souls sharing the physical plane of existence together. But in the grander scheme of eternal life each individual re-enters the fold but still remains within the singularity, or the masters plan. I love the way you have written this one..... very powerful........and loving Jim Troy

Two love birds... apoem of life. Enjoyed the read!

liked very much your two love birds doing everything together but also not dying together! bringing in a great reality of life.. thank yu for sharing. tony

Very much un-contemplated finish at least I was not ready for it…it’s your Mastery to carry till last word of poem and get awed…but known to all … Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Two love birds, well written and holds together very well, The last verse pulls the whole together and gives the poem its stand to perch upon. thanks for sharing michael

We have to learn more things from birds, Ajao nice poem. Good luck!