Wednesday, July 29, 2020

Two Lost Souls ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm playing the blues
to touch that special place
which is the depths of my soul
miles of haunting melodies
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bharati Nayak 30 July 2020

I'm playing the blues to touch that special place which is the depths of my soul miles of haunting melodies still rings true today emotions on fire magic and warm tears beyond and full of wonder- - - An amazingly beautiful poem of love, thanks for sharing.

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Juhaina Tumlu 29 July 2020

Wow so well written Words seep through from time gone past We're just two lost souls We played so much together I wish you were here

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2020

Although it is difficult to know how to survive, still this is very interesting to feel life with deepest core of love. Separation gives pain. Darkness is removed by light. Soul hunts the melodies of love from very far. Music for love is excellently expressed through beauty of perception. An amazing poem is excellently penned....10

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T Rajan Evol 29 July 2020

Wonderful expression, Asim I don't know how to survive This dark long night Where devils are partying Dancing under the moonlit In dark water below.

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