Tuesday, April 9, 2019

Two Little Ducks Comments

Rating: 5.0

On my way to work a sight not expected to see
Were two little ducks on the grass right in front of me
So why was this unusual, I can hear you say
Haven't they just come, so they can have a play
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Jennifer Birchall
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Julia Luber 15 April 2019

An interesting little microscope upon some ducks- practically inspecting their decision to be there and how it made no sense.

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Nadeem Ishaque 11 April 2019

Joy of an unexpected encounter captured in a playful and delightful description: the sight brightened the dreary eyes of the poet and the poem brings a smile to the reader!

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Matthew Holloway 10 April 2019

A joyous little tale

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Kostas Lagos 09 April 2019

A random incident made a perfect poem!

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Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

Hello Jennifer, this poem had made me smile and filled me with wonder and warmth! I shall pursue reading your poems after this one! Thanks for sharing - Psyked

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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