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31.Destiny's Gift
He fixed son's wedding with all readying
But upped to shower heavenly blessing
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In every religion there is a belief that there is a way to clean up the sins, may be a sacred river, pilgrimage or alms. Such beliefs reflect the guilty conscience of the man. But when sins touch the Himalyas the source of Ganges even the sacred river becomes helpless. I liked all the two liners of this poem.
Thank you Akhtar...very happy to have your comments over and over again...thanks a lot
Destiny's Gift to observation to mobile sympathy heavenly blessing is needed. God gives us this blessing in abundance. We clean sins and adore virtue. Due to righteousness we develop more. This poem is well penned basin on scriptural perception. Brilliant expression is witnessed here.10
So pleased Kumar...two liners or couplets looks simple....but much challenging for me to present a matter wholly in condensed form of two lines...this seems to be so interesting too...I'm happy you commented on this...thanks many times...God bless you
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8/2/2025 8:29:58 AM # 1.0.0
Beautifully written dear madam. Thanks for sharing. Top score