Friday, November 24, 2017

Two Liners (Snippets Of Life On Rain 51-60) Comments

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51. Lashing Rains

Pouring flooding rain, rain, rain everywhere
Ho, not a way to go out anywhere
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Indira Renganathan
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Akhtar Jawad 25 November 2017

Amazing two liners, how nicely the poetess has described the various forms of the rains!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2017

Lashing Rains (Two liners 51 to 60) is wonderfully crafted with scintillating expression. Facets of rain and its impact and influence upon human life in varieties in diverse moments are superbly inscribed through this magnificent piece of work! Great craftsmanship! Appreciated your brilliant expression dear madam! I would love to quote: Seasonal prayers soar for enough rains…Seasoned prayers soar in need to stop rains! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Flooding rain everywhere amazes mind. Overflowing lakes, tanks and rivers sometimes burble giving real dreams of perception. Birds do migrate even in this turmoil. Seasonal prayers soar for enough rains. Godly rains of wisdom motivate mind. Excellent two liners are presented.10

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Seema Chowdhury 24 November 2017

wisely composed, nicely expressed. Thanks for sharing.

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