Sunny day in the open meadows
So fun when the kites flew
Soar off the ground like rainbows
Two kites flew, the wind blew
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I like the simplicity of subject that you choose to write. Nice write.
To flying kites is interesting. Life is like kite. It has to face many obatacles as kite faces. It is a best philosophical poem shared. Thanks.
Oh how nice! Kites are full of wonder, I'm glad I happened upon your poetry, if you wish, read a poem I write regarding kites called mashal
As if a wonderful Analogy of our Lives when they are colorful and fly away in the gusts of winds! Yest Prickly beautiful imagery! ! 10++!
American poet .... I missed the name American poet walt witman
Strings tangled and knotted the kites Along the hills kites flyby.... the journey of the kite never ends like us...... wonderful poem best wishes rini shibu.... you are a nature lover and nature poet American poet told that nature and his soul are two mothers for him you also blessed by those two mothers.....
Two lovely kites, or two lives beautiful till turbulence hits them. Nice imagery.
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