Tuesday, March 8, 2022

Two Innocent Minds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two innocent minds were interacting;
One said to another, do you see those floating clouds
One day I threw some pebbles in the sea
And water started to evaporate and now see the magic
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Mamta S 10 March 2022

What a wonderful poem, this is, I am speechless! ! !

1 0 Reply
David Wood 09 March 2022

Excellent poem of clouded minds interacting. The human mind is amazing, it creates works of beauty as well as evil. The mind must be guarded all the time as it wanders far and wide.

1 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 March 2022

this was a joy to read and listen to

1 0 Reply
Unnikrishnan E S 08 March 2022

Clouds are like human minds, where thoughts are painted in all hues and shapes and erased, on and off.. excellent poem,5 *s

1 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
Close
Error Success