Wednesday, October 28, 2020

Two In One Comments

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Nobody, yes nobody hates me but one,
Nobody, yes nobody loves me but one,
May I know dears as to who are you?
The mirror replied, "Look at me."
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2020

Fantastic poem, Akhtar Sahab! Profound thinking involved in this little poem. " I am not one I am two in one" .........The mirror told the Truth! .......Top Stars.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2020

A well penned piece. Truly brilliant and exceptional...5 stars*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 October 2020

What a unique and brilliant poem. that only a great thinker can present and deliver. Cleverly written. Top Marks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

The mirror replied, " Look at me." Oh I see! I am not one I am two in one. /// wow great; most expressive; so, everything and everyone in me! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 October 2020

A wonderful poem sir! Liked it so much. Top star

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