Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Two Hearts In Rhythm Comments

Rating: 4.5

When I'm with you, I can't hate myself...
I'm never crestfallen, I'm never depressed-

You make my heart flutter, my soul set aflight...
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Nathan Beery
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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2014

Short, lovely, well articulated, and romantic. I like the way you captured the bliss of love in your heart and your conviction of the unshakeable love. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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