Thursday, September 29, 2016

Two Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

The physical heart is everybody's
guess and no one is wrong. But
that other heart, the one we know
only through rumors carried by
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Daniel Brick
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Nosheen Irfan 03 October 2016

A piece of great depth n insight. Philosophical, spiritual n mystical. How you have explored the mystery of heart, its physical n spiritual sides, it leaves the reader awestruck. Only those who love unconditionally...will be redeemed, that's a great mystic concept. Your poem speaks to the reader on many levels. And every reading enlightens the reader more. Peace can only be achieved by a perfect fusion of the material n spiritual. The poem takes us beyond the ordinary n we experience a higher level of consciousness. A big 10

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Daniel Brick 04 October 2016

It's wonderful my poem resonates so deeply with you. Your comments reflect the self-talk going on in my head as I wrote it but expressed in clear, emphatic prose which has a poetic element in it. How could it be otherwise? !

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2016

The love you talked about is the love for humanity, love beyond the physical beauty, natural beauty and beauty we can see, touch, hear, smell but the real Love is the one we can feel and realize and live and even die for it. We all have the love spring hidden inside our heart, very seldom we unleash it and allow it to flow free, the boundaries, limits, demarcations and the lines put total restriction on its freedom....A thought provoking poem...LOVED IT, Mr. Daniel,100+++++

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Daniel Brick 04 October 2016

Mohammed your prose comment captures all of the key parts of my poem expressed in enthusiastic word poem refers not to the format but the vision the words convey. IPoem + Comment = a meeting of minds - yours and mine.

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