Two Headed Bird Comments
Come hither children and I will tell you
Something from the past, so fun
A story that is so refreshingly new
Come, and I will tell every one
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Inspired by Poison Tree...yes the plot of a double headed bird stood well.....the life lesson is worth reading.....yet I feel that the middle and the end was not so emphatic as the fisrt few stanzas.Thanks.
Thanks Soumita for your feedback. Actually it wasn't Poison Tree which inspired me to write this. There is a poem in Malayalam which recites the story exactly. I was impressed by that and hence wrote this. And will take your suggestions for improving in future.
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7/25/2025 2:58:10 AM # 1.0.0
Uncommon and wonderful piece of work, well written.
Thanks a lot Rahman... I am glad that you liked it.