Sunday, July 26, 2015

Two Headed Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come hither children and I will tell you
Something from the past, so fun
A story that is so refreshingly new
Come, and I will tell every one
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Shankaran Kutty
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Rahman Henry 26 August 2015

Uncommon and wonderful piece of work, well written.

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Shankaran Kutty 14 September 2015

Thanks a lot Rahman... I am glad that you liked it.

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Soumita Sarkar 27 July 2015

Inspired by Poison Tree...yes the plot of a double headed bird stood well.....the life lesson is worth reading.....yet I feel that the middle and the end was not so emphatic as the fisrt few stanzas.Thanks.

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Shankaran Kutty 27 July 2015

Thanks Soumita for your feedback. Actually it wasn't Poison Tree which inspired me to write this. There is a poem in Malayalam which recites the story exactly. I was impressed by that and hence wrote this. And will take your suggestions for improving in future.

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