Sunday, May 1, 2016

Two Halves Of A Clothes Peg Comments

Rating: 0.0

Warm and snug - tight like a turtleneck
Tightly wound and sprung together
There wasn't a lever, could apart-us ever
We were two halves of a clothes peg.
...
Read full text

Mark Heathcote
COMMENTS
Mike Smith 01 May 2016

Probably could of married that one eh? A very clever metaphor Mark. The rhythm of the poem is carrying. The words flow well into one another. Great write

1 0 Reply
Mark Heathcote 01 May 2016

Much appreciated Mike thanks!

0 0
Mark Heathcote

Mark Heathcote

Manchester
Close
Error Success