Two Flowers And The Bird Comments

Revisiting this lovely poem. Beautiful imagery and great rhyme So mellifluous when read.

Love and pain remain side by side.

A lovely poem sir..... scintillating poetic expression with engaging fragrance....10

Nice and bea poem as usual by javed sb

Beautiful, sad and touching, a great poem.

A very touching poem beautifully crafted with great rhyme. It conveys a selfless and eternality of love. And before I depart, Take back the spring of my broken heart .....Beautiful lines from a lovely poem.10

nice flow, nice photo, adequate rhyming [ ;) ], but it IS a love poem. i don't care so much for THOSE. at least this one also has pain as a topic; that makes the poem bearable for me. hee-hee bri :)

I could only give a spring to you. You in the bouquet and I am on floor....such is the selfless love taking pleasure in giving. Thank you so much for sharing such beautiful poem.

I could only give a spring to you, She in the bouquet and I am down, Could you see me in a jet white gown! ..... / Extremely lovable and touching composition. This shows the lover exercising utmost restraint in a relationship to save the ignominy of the beloved. Thanks a lot for sharing this outstanding piece of poetry.

What a lovely and sweet sad song.....................................

A very sweet and sensitive poem with two flowers and a bird. Beautifully penned with fabulous imagery. Jawad Sahab! You are a wonderful poet!

Love in all it's splendour yet craving to be recognised. beautifulllllllll poem.

A Beautiful poem with lovely picture of bird and two flowers. Beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it.

A lovely poem accompanied by a lovely picture of a bird and two flowers! Enjoyed!

I am loving this poem..... [3 amazing one........

An amazing beauty, a sad but sweet and heart touching poem......................10