Thursday, August 25, 2005

Two Fleas Comments

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A flea sat in the poodle's hair
because he had been stationed there.
His mother left to bug a cat
that's where she stayed and soon got fat.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Raynette Eitel 25 August 2005

This is really delightful, Herbert. I'll give you a ten. Raynette

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 25 August 2005

Cute rhyme! I haven't got to rest yet ;)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 25 August 2005

Lawrence I hate your eights. Ten or nothing I say. What do you say? If you agree I will tell you about the flea's fate... H

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 25 August 2005

Good rhyme. I read and wondered, did the mother flea die of obesity on the cat Or did she take a pee on the Outback?

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